In numerous cultures, young people are often encouraged by adults that they can achieve something if they try to make
optimum
effort. Add an article
the optimum
an optimum
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essay will elaborate Linking Words
the
benefits and drawbacks of providing Change preposition
on the
children
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this
view.
On the one hand, there are a couple of advantages Add the preposition
with this
about
providing hard work value to Change preposition
to
the
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apply
children
. Use synonyms
Firstly
, Linking Words
children
may not give up easily when they face obstacles by remembering that one day they will achieve anything as long as they try hard enough. Use synonyms
For instance
, Linking Words
children
will prepare for school exams optimally despite the difficulties when they want to get a good grade in their school. Use synonyms
Secondly
, Linking Words
children
’s confidence Use synonyms
is
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is also boosted
also
boost when they Linking Words
sure
that they will achieve everything they want as long as they put all of their Add a missing verb
are sure
effort
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efforts
to
their goals.
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into
On the other hand
, possible disadvantages should be considered when adults Linking Words
giving
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give
aforementioned
message. Young people may feel depressed when they face some failures after lots of Add an article
the aforementioned
an aforementioned
efforts
they do. Fix the agreement mistake
effort
Mental
capacity of every child is different, Add an article
The mental
thus
it is not fair to Linking Words
instill
the same perspective Change the spelling
instil
to
all Change preposition
in
children
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
children
may not believe there are other Use synonyms
factors
that will role in every Use synonyms
results
, Change to a singular noun
result
such
as Linking Words
a
destiny, the environment, Remove the article
apply
an
opportunity. Those Correct your spelling
and
factors
cannot Use synonyms
be control
by them. Change the verb form
be controlled
Therefore
, it is not Linking Words
good
choice to cultivate a hard value without considering other Add an article
a good
factors
that Use synonyms
children
cannot change.
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To sum up
, advantages and Linking Words
disadvanatges
should be Correct your spelling
disadvantages
considerd
when talking about cultivating a perspective Correct your spelling
considered
to
young individuals that they can achieve something if they make maximum Change preposition
for
efforts
. The positives are Fix the agreement mistake
effort
children
gain confidence and do not give up easily, Use synonyms
while
negative points are they Linking Words
fell
depressed after facing failures and they will not believe in unchanged Correct your spelling
feel
factors
.Use synonyms