In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvanatges of giving children this message.

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In numerous cultures, young people are often encouraged by adults that they can achieve something if they try to make
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benefits and drawbacks of providing
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view. On the one hand, there are a couple of advantages
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providing hard work value to
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may not give up easily when they face obstacles by remembering that one day they will achieve anything as long as they try hard enough.
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,
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will prepare for school exams optimally despite the difficulties when they want to get a good grade in their school.
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’s confidence
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boost when they
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that they will achieve everything they want as long as they put all of their
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their goals.
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, possible disadvantages should be considered when adults
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message. Young people may feel depressed when they face some failures after lots of
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they do.
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capacity of every child is different,
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it is not fair to
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the same perspective
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may not believe there are other
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that will role in every
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destiny, the environment,
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opportunity. Those
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cannot
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by them.
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, it is not
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choice to cultivate a hard value without considering other
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that
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cannot change.
To sum up
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, advantages and
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disadvantages
should be
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considered
when talking about cultivating a perspective
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young individuals that they can achieve something if they make maximum
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. The positives are
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gain confidence and do not give up easily,
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negative points are they
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depressed after facing failures and they will not believe in unchanged
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