The chart shows the results of the survey about people coffee and tea buying habits in five Australian countries.

The chart shows the results of the survey about people coffee and tea buying habits in five Australian countries.
The chart illustrates the percentage of
people
's
coffee
and tea purchasing and consuming habits in
Sidney
,
Melbourne
, Brisbane,
Adelaide
and
Hobart
in the
last
4 weeks. In terms of
Sidney
,
Melbourne
and
Hobart
, over 60 % of residents went to a cafe in the
last
4 weeks. The proportion of those who consumed instant
coffee
in
Hobart
(54%) was higher than that of
Sidney
and
Melbourne
( 46% and 48% respectively).
However
, over 40% of citizens in
Sidney
and
Melbourne
had a habit of buying fresh
coffee
while
38% of
Hobart
's
people
drank it. In the remaining two cities, purchasing fresh
coffee
was the smallest percentage ( nearly 35%).The percentage of
people
who drank instant
coffee
accounted for 53% in Brisbane and 50% in
Adelaide
. Meanwhile, 48% of
Adelaide
residents went to a cafe, and 55% of
people
in Brisbane had a habit of going to a
coffee
shop.
Overall
,
it is clear that
going to a
coffee
shop was the most common habit except in
Adelaide
.
Moreover
, the number of
people
who bought fresh
coffee
was lower than those who purchased instant
coffee
.
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