There are more and more parents working full time. Some people argue that childcare centres are the best in taking care of children of very young age. Others think grandparents are better carer. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is a common belief that
childcare
centres are the best places to take care of young children
full-time
when their parents do not have time
to take care of their children
. However
, there is a more persuasive argument that grandparents
are better to do this
job as children
can feel safe and improve family bonding.
On the one hand, childcare
centres allow children
to develop academically from an early age. Since teachers who are in childcare
facilities
are all experts at caring, they can provide an advanced education system that fits children
's age and levels. In this
regard, children
can achieve a well-rounded education at an early age, which leads to higher academic performance in the future. Take the example of after-school classes in Korea, they offer various kinds of courses and classes such
as English, reading, and sports. In other words
, baby-sitting facilities
may help children
to grow academically successful.
On the other hand
, both children
and their parents might feel an emotional sense of security when grandparents
are looking after children
. That is
, since children
are already familiar with their grandparents
, there is no need to have time
for adaptation. It has been reported that children
who grow up with their grandparents
tend to have a more gentle and docile personality as they are emotionally stable. Moreover
, parents do not need to worry about their children
in childcare
facilities
since some of those facilities
might discriminate against children
by their tastes. In addition
, spending time
with their grandparents
enables children
to make a great memory with them.
In conclusion, in my opinion, the latter view is more persuasive since spending time
with grandparents
is beneficial for children
's mental health and personality creation.Submitted by sonwoojin1228 on
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