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Your colleague recently gave you a book. You had a presentation, and this book helped you in the presentation. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, • tell the topic of your presentation • why the presentation was important for you • how the book helped you in presentation

#colleague #book #presentation #topic
Dear Alex, I hope
the
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 letter finds you well. I am writing
this
 letter to thank you and
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 your help
for
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 offering your book "marketing genius" for my knowledge enhancement, as it was a great help for me to be able to prepare and offer a wonderful presentation
last
 week. Speaking about the presentation, I had been assigned a duty to brainstorm and develop a marketing strategy for my company's newly
launch
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product
, which is an adjustable sofa set for
the
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smaller homes, and create slides to introduce my ideas to the
product
 development team through presenting these slides
infront
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in front
 of them. As I have newly promoted to the marketing role,
therefore
, offering a mindful seminar on
this
 new launch was highly vital for my upcoming assignments.
Although
 I have been associated with
this
 firm for
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 years now, the emerging challenges
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 respect to the
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responsibilites
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responsibilities
responsibility
 always demand a deep knowledge about the areas that I am currently dealing with. Despite
of
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having a little wisdom about the item specifications, I was able to develop some really great notions using the references from your book.
In addition
, It
also
 helped me to develop the understanding and needs of buyers with some different
mindset
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, and how to elaborate the
product
 details more precisely to get the customers' attention towards the
product
. Thank you so much for offering
this
 support at
this
 stage. I will be looking forward to
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similar guidance from you in the future as well. Regards James
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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