A friend is coming to your country to work for six months. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter, give *a suggestion of a city to live in *recommendations on jobs your friend could do *advice on places where your friend can meet locals Write at least 150 words. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ____,

Dear Alex, I hope you'
re
doing well. I'
m
highly delighted to hear about your upcoming
half year
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trip to Singapore, and I'
m
exicted
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excited
to share some insights about the different aspects of my beloved city. Speaking about the area to live
, Lavender
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town
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would be a great option for certain reasons,
such
as, it's quite near to the downtown.
Furthermore
, the public transport facility is highly active, so you'
ll
not be having any
issue
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moving around in different
part
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of
this
nation.
Moreover
, there are some really good food options, which I'
m
sure that you'
ll
be delighted to explore. As I'
m
aware that you'
re
highly experienced in client management, so there'
re
some really great hotels and consulting firms, which are actively advertising to look for potential candidates to offer
an
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effective dealing with their clients.
In addition
, despite
of
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having a massive brand value associated with
these venture
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, it always
welcome
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the
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fresh talent to join them in order to achieve their career goals. In order to expand your circle, there'
re
some really great places, which I'
m
sure would be helpful for you to find people with similar
interest
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as yours. Different facilities,
such
as
,
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re-creational
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centres and community clubs are some of the hot places, which are often used by
the
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young professionals to meet people and to create friendships, which
lasts
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forever.
Last
but not least, I'
ll
be introducing you to my friends as well. I'
ll
be looking forward to seeing you soon. Take care James
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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