You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event. Write a letter of application to the organizers. In your letter: -explain why you are interested in helping -Give details suitable past experience -suggest ways you might help with the event.

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I would love to work as a volunteer in the charity event you organised. I saw

this

news in the Times Of India newspaper. I was born and brought up in a middle-class family.

Thus

, I know very well the importance of these things.

On the other hand

, my parents donated food and clothes to poor people and sometimes I joined them.So, I am familiar with

this

kind of environment.

Furthermore

, I would like to give you information about my past experience of charity.I work in an NGO whose name is "Bachpan". I gave free education to poor children who were not able to study.

Moreover

, I am the head of the charity club of my college group and I was awarded

with

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the "Rashtriya Bal Puraskar" by the Indian government in 2019.

Therefore

, I wish that I could help you in

this

event. If you know more about me kindly feel free to contact me.If you are interested in me

then

please give me a call. Waiting for your response. Yours faithfully, Steven Smith.

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