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The supplied chart provides the international students graduate rates in Canadian universities from 2001 to 2006.

The supplied chart provides the international students graduate rates in Canadian universities from 2001 to 2006.
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The supplied chart provides the international
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 graduate rates in Canadian universities from 2001 to 2006. It can be clearly observed, that every single study institution significantly increased its number of students in five years
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New Brunswick and British Columbia showed the most rapid ups ,
while
 Manitoba and Ontario were with the less amount of internationals from the beginning.
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 the end ,to the list of low figures , there were added one more college - Newfoundland and Labrador. It
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 had almost the same outcome as Manitoba. It is worth noticing that, British Columbia had a gradual increase. It had a
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little less than 5% ,
however
 , it has been changed till around 10
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 by the time.
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Quebec and Nova Scotia were one of the best in 2001, but
unfortunally
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 showed
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insignificant results , which
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 approximately just
abount
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about
 10. Alberta was one of the small minorities, and of
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eventually
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 it outlines almost the same tendency.
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