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The maps show the changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25 year period from 1980 to 2005.

The maps show the changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25 year period from 1980 to 2005.
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The maps illustrate the development of the plan
of
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for
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 a library over
a
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 8 years period from 2001 to 2009 Generally,
it is clear that
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 the library
experience
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 a significant modernization. Most noticeably, the history and the
self help
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 is in the west of
reading
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 room it has been added many other things On the ground floor in 2001, the fiction section located on the east side after 8 years was changed to a children's book area.
In addition
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, there is
also
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 a children's area. In the
center
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 of the library before the table
were
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was
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 arranged into small tables but changed to long tables. In the east, the newspapers and
periodicals
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periodical
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 areas have been changed to films and
DVDS
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DVDs
. Specially the
south east
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southeast
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 computer has been added. On the east side self-help and
history
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 ranges have been added as
the
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apply
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fiction, the kitchen, the
aconomics
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economics
 and law. Only the south entrance remains the same.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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