The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
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The assigned combination of bars
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a table chart shows the information pertaining to the earnings by five types of material
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the percentile of exports of each type in two years 2015 and 2016. At a fleeting glance,it is evident that the sale of petroleum products was the highest in both periods.The figures for
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accounted for more than 60 billion.
Similarly
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,in the former time,the earnings from exporting engineered goods were more or less than the same.
on the contrary
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,there was a trivial disparity between the income from agriculture items in 2015 and 2016, roughly 30 billion.Gems
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jewellery made up just over 40 billion.
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,Exports of textiles in the initial age were around one-fourth,
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in a later age, they inclined by approximately 5 tons. Probing ahead,the ratio of sending textiles to foreign countries was increased by around 15%, followed by engineered goods, by 8.5%.
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,exports of petroleum items went up by just 3%over the period.
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,trade of agricultural goods overseas climbed,albeit negligibly by less than 1%.
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,the percentage of sending jewellery and gems declined by roughly 5% over time.
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,the revenue from marketing petroleum products had been the highest in both periods;
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,the proportion of sending textiles to another nation increased the highest by the latter year.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • categories
  • value
  • percentage change
  • compare
  • trends
  • changes
  • chart
  • table
  • overview
  • introduce
  • highlight
  • describe
  • summarize
  • information
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