The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The assigned combination of bars
together with
a table chart shows the information pertaining to the earnings by five types of material Linking Words
along with
the percentile of exports of each type in two years 2015 and 2016.
At a fleeting glance,it is evident that the sale of petroleum products was the highest in both periods.The figures for Linking Words
this
accounted for more than 60 billion.Linking Words
Similarly
,in the former time,the earnings from exporting engineered goods were more or less than the same.Linking Words
on the contrary
,there was a trivial disparity between the income from agriculture items in 2015 and 2016, roughly 30 billion.Gems Linking Words
as well as
jewellery made up just over 40 billion.Linking Words
Lastly
,Exports of textiles in the initial age were around one-fourth,Linking Words
while
in a later age, they inclined by approximately 5 tons.
Probing ahead,the ratio of sending textiles to foreign countries was increased by around 15%, followed by engineered goods, by 8.5%.Linking Words
Likewise
,exports of petroleum items went up by just 3%over the period.Linking Words
Also
,trade of agricultural goods overseas climbed,albeit negligibly by less than 1%.Linking Words
In contrast
,the percentage of sending jewellery and gems declined by roughly 5% over time.
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Overall
,the revenue from marketing petroleum products had been the highest in both periods;Linking Words
however
,the proportion of sending textiles to another nation increased the highest by the latter year.Linking Words
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