IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 5

The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009, Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009, Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
These two schedules show the per cent of collages
students
Use synonyms
 who had changed their universities from Europe to Australia in 2007 and 2009 .
Overall
Linking Words
,
according to
Linking Words
 what is shown,
it is clear that
Linking Words
 in the year ,2009 the total increased to 226
students
Use synonyms
 who turned to study in Australia , which is the highest number during the specific time .
However
Linking Words
, around the two pointed years
students
Use synonyms
 who were studying in Australian universities and changed to European universities both years reached the same proportion in total which is 152
students
Use synonyms
 .

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Introduction: The introduction is missing.
▼
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
▼
What to do next:
Look at other essays: