You have recently bought a product after seeing a company’s advertisement. You then discovered that the purchased product did not match the description of the advertisement. Write a letter to the manager of that company. In your letter; • describe the product you bought • state the description the advertisement gave of the product • say what you want the company to do to make it up to you

#product #company’s #advertisement #description #manager #company

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I purchased a red coloured iPhone 14 pro max worth 500 dollars having 256GB internal storage and 6

ram

last

week through your website. I would like to thank the delivery team that I received it within a few days after the order.

However

, it was not as same as advertised on the website. Because on the online portal in the description it mentioned a red-coloured iPhone 14 pro max with 256GB internal storage and 8GB ram but what I have received is a bit different than what is exactly mentioned in the product description. I would be more delighted if you could either provide me with a full refund or replace a new phone with the same product description which was stated in the advertisement. Should you require any

further

information please do not hesitate to revert. Regards, Shiba Kumar Banjara

Submitted by Shiba Kc on Thu Jul 20 2023

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4Linking words
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7 paragraphs

156 words

8.50

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Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

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