You have recently bought a product after seeing a company’s advertisement. You then discovered that the purchased product did not match the description of the advertisement. Write a letter to the manager of that company. In your letter; • describe the product you bought • state the description the advertisement gave of the product • say what you want the company to do to make it up to you

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to inform you that I purchased a red coloured iPhone 14 pro max worth 500 dollars having 256GB internal storage and 6

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week through your website. I would like to thank the delivery team that I received it within a few days after the order.

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, it was not as same as advertised on the website. Because on the online portal in the description it mentioned a red-coloured iPhone 14 pro max with 256GB internal storage and 8GB ram but what I have received is a bit different than what is exactly mentioned in the product description. I would be more delighted if you could either provide me with a full refund or replace a new phone with the same product description which was stated in the advertisement. Should you require any

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information please do not hesitate to revert. Regards, Shiba Kumar Banjara

Submitted by Shiba Kc on Thu Jul 20 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

156 words

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