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An increasing number of professional, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries. What problems does this cause? Solutions?

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There has been a continuous rise in the number of well-educated specialists in different careers who are migrating from
low economic
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countries
 to
higher economic
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countries
. There are several factors that have contributed to
this
 trend.
This
 essay will discuss the various reasons and
also
 propose a few mitigation strategies.
Firstly
, people immigrate because they believe that there are better chances of success and making ends meet in other
countries
. In many poor
countries
, the remuneration is often not commensurate with global standards. These
professionals
 have been exposed to better world views and are aware that they can earn more. One way to address
this
 is to have more people who work remotely. It is a popular phrase that the world is a global village. Advancements in technology,
for
instance
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 telemedicine and remote working make it possible for
professionals
 to work at global organizations without leaving their home
countries
. Another reason why specialists are leaving is because they want to be better at their chosen fields. An unfortunate fallout of being from a poor country means that the state of education is abysmal. Most
professionals
 want to be able to compete globally and they often want to go to better
countries
 to be exposed to better opportunities like professional fellowships,
trainings
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 etc. An important way to tackle
this
 problem is to engage with political stakeholders to encourage more exchange programs.
This
 will allow more tutors for better-ranked schools, universities and other institutions
offer
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 learning sessions in poorer
countries
. In conclusion,
professionals
 leave where they are native
of
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for greener pastures for a number of reasons. Taking advantage of technology and engaging with stakeholders can reduce these growing numbers.
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