ome countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

some countries provide particular provisions only for

most

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talented

athletes

without facilitating

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the other people who like to do

sports

.

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is

negative

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concepet

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as

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a country because individuals can improve their

talents

if they have proper

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and space

while

top

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top-level

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level

athletes

was

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taken the

fully

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attention of

the

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skilled responsible people.

Sports

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is a crucial factor

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building the nation and

to lift

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the name of the country in the world.

Therefore

,

athletes

who have relevant

talents

and skills need to get

assisstance

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assistance

of

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the government because they can participate

for

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the competition to represent the state. For that, they need proper

equipments

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and

facilities

which

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supplied by the government.

For instance

, if a

national

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level

athlete

have

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sufficient attention ,

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for diets and special guides for training will enhance the

talents

gradually to achieve international competitions .

Hence

, providing special

facilities

is salient.

On the other hand

, states have a huge responsibility

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the other citizens'

sports

needs

such

as

buiding

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building

play grounds

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,

fitness

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centers

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and organising

lacal

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local

competitions. It will be a

benificial

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beneficial

factor to improve the skills of the children who have born

talents

and who can develop by

practicing

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under supervision.

Therfore

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Therefore

, it is a key component to offer

nessassities

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necessities

for every

individuals

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in the country who like to touch

sports

achievements.

To conclude

, I strongly believe that supplying

sports

facilities

for each

individuals

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is very important to develop the hidden

talents

of the people.

Although

it is,

top

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top-level

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level

athletes

need to get special

facilities

according to

their

level

of

telents

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talent

talents

. It will be a positive thing if the state can supply

sports

equipments

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.