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The maps illustrate the Islip town center now and how it would be changed in the future.

The maps illustrate the Islip town center now and how it would be changed in the future.
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The map represents the future development of the Islip town
centre
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.
Overall
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 the Islip
Centre
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 will have a complete makeover change in time ahead.
In addition
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, they are adding numerous facilities in that zone. Currently, the Islip town
centre
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 has
shops
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 on both sides of the main
road
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, which is located on the North top.
Whereas
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 above
shops
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, the countryside is there and the one below the
road
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 shop has housing. The main roads,first right lead to the path for school and the
centre
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 of the South has another housing. The second right of the main
road
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, helps people to reach the park. In a planned development, It has a dual carriageway
road
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, which gives a connection to the inside facility at the East corner and
also
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 to the school and housing at the outside
road
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. The
centre
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 part of the plan has a layout of one straight row for
shops
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, below that on the left side housing is there and on the right side, they have new housing, adjacent to it ,the park is located. Some area is left for pedestrians on top of the
shops
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 category.
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, in the North, they planned for a bus station followed by a shopping
centre
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 and car park. They have another new housing in the northeast.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words centre, shops, road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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