You have recently moved to a different city for work, but you want to maintain contact with a friend from your previous workplace. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •describe the city you moved to; •tell him/her about your new job; •invite him/her to visit you.

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Dear Kumar, I’m writing

this

letter to let you know about my new location and my new job role. I hope

this

mail finds you well. Currently, I have been living in Toronto City in the Woodside neighbourhood for a couple of months. Over here, the atmosphere is really excellent. Especially, the morning sunrise and evening sunset were amazing. Apart from that, the cost of living in

this

town is really cheap when we comparing with my previous office location.

Furthermore

, I do love

this

job because it is something related to my university background. Apart from that, in

this

employment, I need to classify the big data which were given to me.

Moreover

, I need to transform them from numbers into visuals.

This

role is challenging for me, but

still

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it motivates me to achieve my goals with a critical-thinking mindset.

Finally

, I would like to invite you and your family members to my new house.

First,

please let me know before starting your journey. So, I can prepare my house for your accommodation.

Secondly

, if you share the dates in advance, I can purchase the tickets for site-seeing events at a low cost. I hope you can understand my role

as well as

my situation and looking forward to hearing from you soon. All the best, Sam

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coherence cohesion

Continue to organize your ideas clearly as you've done, ensuring one main idea per paragraph for stronger coherence.

coherence cohesion

Keep using appropriate transitions to connect ideas smoothly.

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Consider incorporating a wider variety of sentence structures for added complexity and interest.

task achievement

Employ a richer vocabulary to more vividly express your thoughts.

coherence cohesion

Nicely organized paragraphs, with each one focusing on a specific aspect (the city, your job, the invitation).

task achievement

Your letter has a friendly tone, which is suitable for communicating with a friend.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

219 words

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