You have recently moved to a different city for work, but you want to maintain contact with a friend from your previous workplace. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •describe the city you moved to; •tell him/her about your new job; •invite him/her to visit you.

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Dear Kumar, I’m writing

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letter to let you know about my new location and my new job role. I hope

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mail finds you well. Currently, I have been living in Toronto City in the Woodside neighbourhood for a couple of months. Over here, the atmosphere is really excellent. Especially, the morning sunrise and evening sunset were amazing. Apart from that, the cost of living in

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town is really cheap when we comparing with my previous office location.

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, I do love

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job because it is something related to my university background. Apart from that, in

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employment, I need to classify the big data which were given to me.

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, I need to transform them from numbers into visuals.

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role is challenging for me, but

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it motivates me to achieve my goals with a critical-thinking mindset.

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, I would like to invite you and your family members to my new house.

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please let me know before starting your journey. So, I can prepare my house for your accommodation.

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, if you share the dates in advance, I can purchase the tickets for site-seeing events at a low cost. I hope you can understand my role

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my situation and looking forward to hearing from you soon. All the best, Sam

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coherence cohesion

Continue to organize your ideas clearly as you've done, ensuring one main idea per paragraph for stronger coherence.

coherence cohesion

Keep using appropriate transitions to connect ideas smoothly.

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Consider incorporating a wider variety of sentence structures for added complexity and interest.

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Employ a richer vocabulary to more vividly express your thoughts.

coherence cohesion

Nicely organized paragraphs, with each one focusing on a specific aspect (the city, your job, the invitation).

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Your letter has a friendly tone, which is suitable for communicating with a friend.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

219 words

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