The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. IELTS Writing Task 1
The bar graph displayed presents data regarding the amount of social networking
sites
individuals used in Canada during the 2014-2015 period.
Overall
, the highest percentage of people in both years made use of only one website. However
, from there, the amount of individuals drops
gradually as the number of Change the verb form
drop
sites
rises.
To begin
with, it is noteworthy that the peak number of users of social media is 36% in 2014, whom
were using one site. Change the pronoun
who
However
, the situation changes, as the figures drop steadily, to 23% using two sites
, and eventually plummeting to 2% of the population using five sites
. No form of social networking is used by 22% of the population in the same year.
The situation has not varied significantly in 2015. 21% of people did not use social networking services. The same fashion is followed as the previously stated one, except that the net difference between the peak and the lowest number is less. Furthermore
, the amount of users interacting with five websites is double that of 2014.Submitted by leensarar on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sites with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drops" was used 2 times.
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