Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Social networking
websites
are believed to have significant adverse implications on
people
and
society
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the society
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they live in. In
this
essay, I will argue that
websites
like Facebook and Twitter are indeed advantageous to both individuals and society as they provide
people
with means to communicate easily
as well as
facilitating
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interaction with
larger
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a larger
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number of
people
and
befriending
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them. One of the main
reason
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for my disagreement with
the
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social networking sites having negative effects on mankind and their community is that they are alleviating
people
's past interaction issues by giving access to these easy-to-use applications and
websites
. Most of these platforms are presenting a more convenient way to familiarize or chat with others and
designed
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so that individuals could spend as much time as possible interacting with each other. These platforms,
also
, encourage
people
's
communication
due to
the fact that their revenue is in large
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based on their users being shown adverts that are
poping
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up whilst using it. Instagram and Tick Tok,
for example
, have earned a fortune in
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advertisements because they have introduced a more suitable environment for their users to interact. The easier the use of
websites
for
communication
, the more
people
will utilize
it
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them
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for
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their means of
communication
.
Moreover
, by spending time on these platforms, one can have access to
larger
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number of individuals to befriend them compared to face-to-face interaction.
This
can give more opportunities to enlarge the circle of friends and
acquintances
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acquaintances
, and
consequently
socialize more
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respect to the past form of
communication
.
This
is not only more beneficial
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personal
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level
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but
also
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porfessional
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professional
level
since relevant businesses can
also
interact and expand through these sites.
For instance
, a commercial photographer can present their work on
instagram
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and attract potential relevant markets or customers of their quality of service.
Hence
, expanding the circle of
people
can have personal and professional benefits. In conclusion, I would argue that social networking sites have positive effects on
people
and society on the grounds that they make communicating more easier, and
further
, they enlarge the community of friends and
people
you know, which can have positive prospects both on
individual
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an individual
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level
and
professional
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a professional
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level
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • erosion
  • face-to-face
  • interactions
  • privacy concerns
  • data breaches
  • misinformation
  • polarize
  • cyberbullying
  • online harassment
  • procrastination
  • productivity
  • social isolation
  • dissemination
  • breeding ground
  • vast amounts
  • personal information
  • mental health
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