Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Social networking

websites

are believed to have significant adverse implications on

people

and

society

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the society

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they live in. In

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essay, I will argue that

websites

like Facebook and Twitter are indeed advantageous to both individuals and society as they provide

people

with means to communicate easily

as well as

facilitating

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interaction with

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a larger

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number of

people

and

befriending

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them. One of the main

reason

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reasons

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for my disagreement with

the

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social networking sites having negative effects on mankind and their community is that they are alleviating

people

's past interaction issues by giving access to these easy-to-use applications and

websites

. Most of these platforms are presenting a more convenient way to familiarize or chat with others and

designed

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so that individuals could spend as much time as possible interacting with each other. These platforms,

also

, encourage

people

's

communication

due to

the fact that their revenue is in large

parts

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part

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based on their users being shown adverts that are

poping

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popping

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up whilst using it. Instagram and Tick Tok,

for example

, have earned a fortune in

the

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advertisements because they have introduced a more suitable environment for their users to interact. The easier the use of

websites

for

communication

, the more

people

will utilize

it

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them

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for

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their means of

communication

.

Moreover

, by spending time on these platforms, one can have access to

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a larger

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number of individuals to befriend them compared to face-to-face interaction.

This

can give more opportunities to enlarge the circle of friends and

acquintances

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acquaintances

, and

consequently

socialize more

in

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with

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respect to the past form of

communication

.

This

is not only more beneficial

in

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personal

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a personal

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level

,

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but

also

better for

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porfessional

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professional

level

since relevant businesses can

also

interact and expand through these sites.

For instance

, a commercial photographer can present their work on

instagram

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and attract potential relevant markets or customers of their quality of service.

Hence

, expanding the circle of

people

can have personal and professional benefits. In conclusion, I would argue that social networking sites have positive effects on

people

and society on the grounds that they make communicating more easier, and

further

, they enlarge the community of friends and

people

you know, which can have positive prospects both on

individual

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an individual

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level

and

professional

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a professional

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level

.