The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph clearly illustrates the changes in the funds of three bakeries each year. The data were gathered in Calgary between 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, there was a wild fluctuation in the income of all bakeries in
the given time.
Change preposition
at
To begin
with, Bolo Cakery started the lowest earning in 2000 at 20000 dollars
before experiencing a slight fluctuation until 2003. After that, there was no change in the annual earning of Bolo Cakery from 2003 to 2005 at just under 40000 dollars
. At the same period, Amandine Bakery remained stable, too and the income of this
company was almost 19000 higher than Bolo Cakery. Moreover
, this
amount increased gradually and become a company which had the highest amount of money with just over 100000 dollars
.
Mari Bakeshop started at approximately 80000 dollars
which was the highest amount in all bakeries in 2000. The figure for Mari Bakeshop experienced a gentle increase before falling. The income of Mari Bakeshop halved to 40000 dollars
during the given period, and this
earning was the lowest one in 2010.Submitted by gficnm
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