The pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrests.

The pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrests.
The data presented in the graphs illustrate the percentage of arrests made based on reasons and gender in the five years ending 1994.
Overall
,
males
are getting arrested more than
females
, with public drinking as the first place for arrest reason for both sexes. In five years, more men are arrested than
females
, with 32 per cent of
males
,
whereas
only 9 per cent of women are seized. People apprehended for drinking in public are mostly
females
, with a percentage above 35%. For
males
, they have public drinking leading the reason, with drunk driving
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the second place.
However
,
this
is not the case for women, who have assault as the second highest.
Although
females
have the highest percentage of arrests
due to
drinking in public, other motives
such
as drunk driving, breach of an order, assault, theft, other reason, and no answer did not exceed 20%, whilst a little above 25% of the
males
are arrested
as a consequence
of driving when drunk. In comparison, men always led in percentages of recent arrests,
while
ladies only exceeded in public drinking, assault, and
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