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happiness is considered very important in life. why is it difficult to define? what factors are important in achieving hapiness?

#happiness #life #factors #hapiness
To be prosperous in life, one has to be considerably happy and mentally sound.
Happiness
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 the other hand,is difficult to describe.
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, there are factors
such
 as mental and physical
health
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 achieving
happiness
. We simply say
happiness
 but in depth, it is difficult to fish out
happiness
, as human nature itself is complicated in nature. We question ourselves once, possession of money and wealth
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happiness
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 it is for the time being, with the money people can effort luxury houses, cars and for some even a spouse. But these are for the short term, in the long
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 it becomes worrisome. For ,instance you have an expensive car,
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this
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car
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 you have to bear
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 of losing it to robbers or
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meeting
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an accident. Can we consider
this
 wealth as a source of
happiness
?
Hence
 it is difficult to define
happiness
. Having said that, there are certain contributing factors to being happy
such
 as good physical and mental
health
. The healthier your physical and mental well-being the happier you will be.
For example
, a person who maintains a good diet, regularly
exercise
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 and focuses on their mental training, these people can focus effectively on their daily activities starting from house chores to their jobs. With physical
health
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 they earn for living and mental
health
 balances the work life and attitude towards limitation for human desire like wanting more.
Therefore
,
happiness
 is maintained within these people. To conclude
happiness
 can be achieved by those who can balance their mental attitude towards desire and their physical
health
 is maintained.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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