The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, | 2023, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, |

2023, and future projections for 2025.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Nowadays, every city is obliged to sell some items or services. Export is an important part
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economics
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of a country or a city. Now, I want to compare some export projects in Southland. First of all, we should consider the
income
of
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profitable sphere
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international tourism, in 2000's
income
there
was
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about 8 billion pounds per
year
. Now, we can see the mark of about 9
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and by the future
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it will rise to 10
billions
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.
Secondly
, there is another
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niche - dairy
products
. At the
beggining
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beginning
of the
21st century
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revenue was quite low - 7
billions
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, nowadays we have 10 billion pounds of
income
per
year
, and experts claim that
this
amount will be cut by 500
thousands
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in 2025th.
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last
, but not least, is the meat
products
sector,
earning
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here there the highest in
2000
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year
, but in the
progression
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they are getting lower and lower.
Overall
,
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profitable export of Southland is
the
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international tourism, the next
one
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niche is
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dairy
products
, earning here have
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and will be stabilized.
Also
, the meat
products
selling
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are quite unfunny, because
income
are
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getting lower and lower every
year
.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words income, year, products with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • trends
  • projections
  • categories
  • international tourism
  • dairy products
  • meat products
  • increase
  • decrease
  • significant
  • analyze
  • highlight
  • summarize
  • main features
  • comparisons
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