The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, | 2023, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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income
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, and experts claim that this
amount will be cut by 500 thousands
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earnings
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the 2000
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, but in the progression
they are getting lower and lower.
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