The charts show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, and 2010. In the pie charts, there were four majors given in those years: Computer science, Medicine, Business, and Law.

The charts show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, and 2010. In the pie charts, there were four majors given in those years: Computer science, Medicine, Business, and Law.
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three pie charts in combination
depicts
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the proportion of degrees received in different
specialization
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at the National University in
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1990, 2000 and 2010. The data in
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the charts
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clearly show that computer science is getting more and more popular each year. In 1990 computer
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science
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and Business
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same
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30% each, but computer science increased by 10% in 2000, and
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5% in 2010.
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Business is a degree which is getting less preferred degree, which was 30% in 1990, 25% in 2000 and declined till 15% in 2010.
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, it is important to highlight that law is the least popular degree, which was 15% in 1990, 10% in 2000 and slightly increased in 2010 by reaching 15%. Medicine is an area which remained more or less stable in 1990 was 25%, slightly increased in 2000 by 5% and faced
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decline in 2010 by 5%.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • degrees granted
  • majors
  • trends
  • significant increases/decreases
  • stable trends
  • technological advancements
  • job market demand
  • healthcare policies
  • research breakthroughs
  • economic cycles
  • globalization
  • entrepreneurship trends
  • legislation
  • societal issues
  • international policies
  • academic and professional interests
  • implications
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