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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. Television has affected people communication with each other.

#television #people #communication
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 in technology, new things are invented.
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 these inventions
havw
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have
 been utilized for improving our life, they
also
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 have affected some
part
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parts
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 of our life
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 as communication. Some believe that some devices
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 as
Television
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has
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 had
negative
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a negative
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 impact on our relationship. I
partailly
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partially
 agree with
statement
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 owing
the
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 following reason: The first and perhaps the most significant reason for
people
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 in favour of
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 issue is that currently,
people
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 would rather
to
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spend
thier
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their
 leisure
time
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 in front of
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television
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the television
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 and
consequently
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, they would not have enough
time
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 to spend with their parents, spouses, children, or even their friend.
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, individuals coming back from work
firstly
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 turn on the screen and find a
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channel
chance
 to entertain them.
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,
other
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others
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 believe that
watchig
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watching
 some programs can help the public to strengthen their
communicaction
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communication
communications
 skills. First of all, there are plenty of psychological programs which educate
people
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how
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on how
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 to communicate effectively or how to improve
thier
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their
 connections. To illustrate, Rah-e-Zendegi is a
poopular
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popular
 program
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on
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 national
television
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 which invites sophisticated
professions
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professionals
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 to teach fundamental communication
skill
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skills
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.
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, they respond to
audience's
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the audience's
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question
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questions
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 in
this
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 field to assist them.
In addition
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, sometimes, some movies or other
genre
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genres
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 can be a reason to collect
people
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.
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, world cup
competition
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competitions
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 can gather
people
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 to enjoy their spare
time
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besides
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 improving their relationship.
To sum up
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,
Television
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 like other inventions has pros and cons. It can affect our life
nagatively
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negatively
 or positively. The public should make efforts to fade its negative consequences on their relationship by spending much
time
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 with their intimate
people
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.
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