A road near your home is damaged. Write a letter to the council of your town/city to complain about it. In your letter – Tell them who are you and where you live – Explain the nature of your complaint – Say what you would like them to do about it

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Livia, the oldest resident of

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neighborhood and my house address is 145 stow road. We have a maple tree in our front yard and I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the bad condition of my road. As you are aware, we had a hurricane

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week and it caused unpredictable damage on my road that has not been solved yet. There are two giant potholes in front of my driveway and

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is not the main problem. The point is that the kids of our neighborhood are cycling there as usual but they are having several problems because they are falling and scratching their bodies. We had to bring a boy to the hospital

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morning,

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the fact that he fell and cut his head. As I am concerned, I would like you to solve

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dangerous problem in our friendly

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, fixing the potholes as soon as possible to avoid more accidents and to guarantee the conservation of our area. If you need a reference for a company to do it, you can reach me at 456-5635 at any time. I look forward to a swift resolution. Yours faithfully, Livia Barbosa

liviatentorFri Jul 21 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

203 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Infrastructure
Municipal
Potholes
Asphalt deterioration
Congestion
Commuters
Preventative maintenance
Civic responsibility
Due diligence
Expedite
Safety hazards
Logistics
Accessibility
Rectify
Public welfare
Stakeholders
Proactive measures
Liaise
Acknowledgment
Constituent

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