Your friend has asked you to help him/her to ﬁnd a music teacher for his/her child. Write a letter to your friend that you have found a suitable teacher. In your letter, you should tell: what experience the teacher has why you think he/she is suitable how to get in touch with the teacher. write 150 words

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Dear Patrick, Hi Patrick, how is your family trip going? I have just checked your email that you are trying to find a piano instructor for your son. Since I am not a professional musician, I do not have enough contact.

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, I know one possible person who is currently playing in a live band. His name is Henry. He studied composing major in Korean University. When he was young, he almost got a chance to join the Korean national orchestra, but unfortunately,

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a car accident, he could not come for the final audition. By the way, he had a really good talent for teaching piano. He used to teach a couple of children. And everyone was satisfied with his class.

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, I would recommend you talk with him about it. Usually, he is really busy that he does not check his phone. So I will forward you his email address. I hope you like him. Please let me know once you make a decision. Best regards, Hugo.

hugo65kimFri Jul 21 2023

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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7 paragraphs

170 words

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