The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates how the public
library
has changed during a twenty-year period. Overall
, most of the spaces which were mostly full of books
have been replaced with new facilities. Also
, it is obvious that tables and chairs, which used to be in front of the entrance, no longer exist now.
In terms of the past library
, a reading room was the only separate space where people could read newspapers and magazines. However
, the old library
had a variety of reading materials and entertaining resources such
as CDs, videos and computer games. Also
, customers could get services including book returning at the enquiry desk.
In contrast
, the current library
has more facilities, including a lecture room, a computer room, and a cafe. In addition
to this
, individuals now can use self-service machines when returning books
and get additional support from the information desk. Regarding the kinds of books
, it newly provides people with children
fiction Change noun form
children's
books
and all reference books
, which were not available in the past.Submitted by jinny921108 on
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