The diagram illustrates tthe process of production of olive. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The chart represents the method of producing olive
oil
. Overall
, it shows that there are 7 steps that need to be followed. The oil
and water need to be stored separately.
Initially
, a person plucks a good olive fruit from a tree manually and rinses the olive with cold water in the rinsing machine.As a next step ,the olive is smashed using a machine and we get two products out of it, one is olive paste and the other is stones.
In the fourth stage stuff the paste in the Bag with holes and place it in the pressing machine to extract the liquid. Once done with pressing move on to separating to make the usage of the product. By this
phase, the oil
will be divided into two products one in oil
form and another in water source. Finally
, it will be stored in the warehouse and ready for sale.Submitted by sowmya madhavan on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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