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In the future all cars,buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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Recently, there has been a huge discussion among generations
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whether
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 the merits of automated means of
transportation
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 upsurge the demerits. I am a staunch believer that
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driveless
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driverless
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 vehicles are
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beneficial
 for many reasons
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 as saving
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 and lessening the congestion of roads and
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streets
. On the one hand, some scientists believe that there is a huge number of
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disadvantages
for
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 shifting from
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, buses and trucks which are driven by human drivers to
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 that depends on automatic techniques
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 as the increase in the number of road accidents caused by
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driveless
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cars
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. To illustrate, an automated car
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 is not trusted to be able to react to different weather circumstances
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 wind and heavy rain. An eminent example of
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 is the reported accident that took place in the United States of America about a car that lost control and
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caused
 huge damage
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constructions
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 and
pedisterians'
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pedestrians
 lives.
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, these specialists believe that there are so many tests and experiments to be applied before the
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transference
 to
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driveless
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 means of
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.
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, a plethora of youths
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 that the merits of using
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 new technology are higher than the disadvantages because it can save
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 which can be used to invest in other useful activities like reading and socializing
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 and can
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 contribute to the solution of crowded streets.
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 means that
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 when there is no need for a driver,
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time
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 used to commute to and from work can be
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benefited
 from by talking to other passengers,or
in
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reading.
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,
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 of a silent father driving his children to school, we can see custodians socializing with their beloved sons and daughters. Another
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beneficial
 aspect of
driveless
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 vehicles is the less number of
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 on roads which
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 in reducing congestion.
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,
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shifting
 to the use of buses that don't need a driver can be a helpful switch regarding
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time saving
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 and crowded cities.
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technology
 to the manufacture of
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driveless
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driverless
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transportation
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 can lead to
much
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benifits
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benefits
benefit
. I believe that these automated
cars
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 can save
time
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 and contribute to solutions for problems
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 as
the
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overcrowdes
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overcrowded
overcrowds
 roads.
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