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This chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Walse between 1918 and 2011

This chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Walse between 1918 and 2011
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illustrstes hnformation abour
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illustrates information about
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owned and rented households in
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two
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 countries ,England and
Walse
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Wales
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 from the period 1918 to 20011. from an
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perspective
 it is evident that was
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a disparty
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disparty
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disparity
 between the
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proportion
 of owned households and the rented
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,
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 they have the same strong of growing but in different periods.
According to
 the chart below we can see clearly that rented
houses
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 increased
gardally
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gradually
 over 70%in 1918,
while
 the
owned
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number of owned
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houses
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low
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 rate it was over 20%,
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 we can observed owned
houses
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 up
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high
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a high
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 level between 1991-2000
Whereas
, slightly decline at more 60% but it has sharply
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dropped
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 30% ,So the owned
houses
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stood in the good
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figure
figures
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 of the time which
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allow
 people to live in
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owned
houses
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words houses with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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