The pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrests.
Pie graphs demonstrate the
percentages
of males and females arrested until 1994 in five years period and the bar graph illustrate
the actual Correct subject-verb agreement
illustrates
reason
of
them. The portion of men, which got arrested, was bigger than women. And the main Change preposition
for
reason
of
arrest is public drinking for everybody.
Change preposition
for
Firstly
, 32 percentages
of males Replace the word
per cent
caught
by police. And Add a missing verb
were caught
reasons
for nearly 5 Correct article usage
the reasons
percentages
of them were not known. Some of the reasons had nearly Replace the word
per cent
same
Correct article usage
the same
percentages
between 15 and 20. These are The Breach order, assault, theft and other reason
. The second main reason
for men is drink
driving. And Replace the word
drunk
percentages
of it were approximately 26. Correct article usage
the percentages
Last
one was public drinking with 31 Correct article usage
The last
percentages
.
Replace the word
per cent
Secondly
, 9 percentages
of women Replace the word
per cent
arrested
in 5 years. Nearly 7 Add a missing verb
were arrested
percentages
of them had Replace the word
per cent
not
clear Correct your spelling
no
reason
. Approximately between 10 and 15 percentages
there are 2 reasons: Breach of order and theft, And nearly 5 Replace the word
per cent
percentages
above them were other Replace the word
per cent
reason
and assault. Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
The public
drinking took nearly 38 Correct article usage
Public
percentages
.Replace the word
per cent
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentages, reason with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 11 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 5 times.
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