The pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrests.

The pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrests.
Pie graphs demonstrate the
percentages
of males and females arrested until 1994 in five years period and the bar graph
illustrate
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illustrates
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the actual
reason
of
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them. The portion of men, which got arrested, was bigger than women. And the main
reason
of
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arrest is public drinking for everybody.
Firstly
, 32
percentages
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of males
caught
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were caught
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by police. And
reasons
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the reasons
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for nearly 5
percentages
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of them were not known. Some of the reasons had nearly
same
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the same
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percentages
between 15 and 20. These are The Breach order, assault, theft and other
reason
. The second main
reason
for men is
drink
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driving. And
percentages
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the percentages
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of it were approximately 26.
Last
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one was public drinking with 31
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.
Secondly
, 9
percentages
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of women
arrested
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were arrested
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in 5 years. Nearly 7
percentages
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of them had
not
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no
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clear
reason
. Approximately between 10 and 15
percentages
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there are 2 reasons: Breach of order and theft, And nearly 5
percentages
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above them were other
reason
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reasons
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and assault.
The public
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Public
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drinking took nearly 38
percentages
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentages, reason with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 11 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 5 times.

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