Tourism has increased so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, others claim that it is good for the economy. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinion?
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so much over the Correct your spelling
grown
half century
that it is having a mainly Add a hyphen
half-century
the
detrimental effect on local Correct article usage
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people
and the ecosystem. Use synonyms
However
, others believe that it is good for the Linking Words
economy
. In my opinion, the merits of Use synonyms
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tourism
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the tourism
industry
outweigh the demerits, because Use synonyms
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the tourism
industry
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boosts
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economy
, and make Use synonyms
people
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a new
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new cultures
a new culture
cultures
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On the one hand, there are several downsides Use synonyms
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the tourism
industry
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people
and the environment. Regarding local Use synonyms
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, mass Use synonyms
tourists
can put a lot of Use synonyms
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strain
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Therefore
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tourists
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tourists
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other
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increase
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overuseing
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the tourism
industry
can create issues related to air contamination in local Use synonyms
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On the other hand
, I would like to argue the benefits of Linking Words
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tourism
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the tourism
industry
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significantly
more than Add a missing verb
are significantly
drawbacks
. The primary advantage of Correct article usage
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tourism
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enhance
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economy
of the country. To illustrate, Use synonyms
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attractions, which Change the noun form
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these money
can improve the Change the determiner
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economy
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local
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the local
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country
Furthermore
will create more jobs opportunity and income for local Linking Words
people
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the gap between nations is another benefit of Wrong verb form
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tourism
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the tourism
industry
. To put Use synonyms
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people
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opportunity
to experience Correct article usage
the opportunity
a new
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new cultures
a new culture
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tourists
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As a result
, local Linking Words
people
will become more open-mind to accept other Use synonyms
cultures
and backgrounds.
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To sum up
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For
my perspective, the upsides of Change preposition
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tourism
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the tourism
industry
outweigh the downsides, because Use synonyms
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tourism
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the tourism
industry
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boosts
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economy
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cultures
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