Tourism has increased so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, others claim that it is good for the economy. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinion?
Tourism
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The tourism
industry
has growed
so much over the Correct your spelling
grown
half century
that it is having a mainly Add a hyphen
half-century
the
detrimental effect on local Correct article usage
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people
and the ecosystem. However
, others believe that it is good for the economy
. In my opinion, the merits of tourism
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the tourism
industry
outweigh the demerits, because tourism
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the tourism
industry
can boosts
the Change the verb form
boost
economy
, and make people
more open-mind to accept a new
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new cultures
a new culture
cultures
.
On the one hand, there are several downsides of
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tourism
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the tourism
industry
on
local Change preposition
for
people
and the environment. Regarding local people
, mass tourists
can put a lot of strian
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strain
in
infrastructure, namely, roads, homes, and water supply. Change preposition
on
Therefore
, mass tourists
can reduce the quality of basic services provide
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provided
for
local inhabitants. When it comes to the environment, Change preposition
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tourists
often use cars or flights to transfer from place
to Correct pronoun usage
one place
other
, which means Correct quantifier usage
another
increase
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an increase
of
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from
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the overuseing
overuseing
of cars or flights. Correct your spelling
overuse
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Consequently
, tourism
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the tourism
industry
can create issues related to air contamination in local area
.
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On the other hand
, I would like to argue the benefits of tourism
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the tourism
industry
significantly
more than Add a missing verb
are significantly
drawbacks
. The primary advantage of Correct article usage
the drawbacks
tourism
enhance
the Change the verb form
enhances
economy
of the country. To illustrate, tourists
will spend money on hotels , public transport, and tourists
attractions, which Change the noun form
tourist
these money
can improve the Change the determiner
this money
economy
of local
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the local
conutry
. Correct your spelling
country
Furthermore
will create more jobs opportunity and income for local people
. For instance
, thousands of local people
will work as, guided tours, waiters on
hotels, and taxi drivers. Change preposition
in
Reduce
the gap between nations is another benefit of Wrong verb form
Reducing
tourism
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the tourism
industry
. To put in other words
, local people
will have opportunity
to experience Correct article usage
the opportunity
a new
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new cultures
a new culture
cultures
through communicate
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communication
tourists
. As a result
, local people
will become more open-mind to accept other cultures
and backgrounds.
To sum up
, For
my perspective, the upsides of Change preposition
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tourism
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the tourism
industry
outweigh the downsides, because tourism
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the tourism
industry
can boosts
the Change the verb form
boost
economy
, and give local individuals opportunity
to experience Add an article
the opportunity
an opportunity
a
new Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
cultures
and backgrounds.Submitted by faiz3177 on
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