Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter – explain why you changed jobs – describe your new job – tell him/her your other news

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Dear Mary, Long time no see. I hope you are always healthy and safe. I am writing

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letter to tell you that I have changed my job for 1 month already. I took a lot of time to make

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decision because I worked there for almost 2 years and have the opportunity to meet so many friendly customers. In my previous job, I didn't have so many chances to use languages, which makes my English is going down

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. That's why, I decided to stop that position.

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, I want to tell you about my new job now. I am working as a consultant sales staff, I need to work with foreigners every

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and I can be an interpreter for my boss.

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, let me tell you a secret thing of mine. I am going to get married next month. I hope you can attend my wedding

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. I am looking forward to receiving your reply soon. Yours sincerely, Joseph Hien

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

167 words

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Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter – explain why you changed jobs – describe your new job – tell him/her your other news

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Technology is becoming increasingly prevalent in the world today. Given time, technology will completely replace the teacher in the classroom. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Ordinary people try to copy famous people either regarding magazines or watching TV. Why do they do this? Do you think it’s a good idea to copy this people?

Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shred freely. Discuss both views and give your opinion.