The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010.

The pie charts compare the proportion of online sales across different retail sectors in Canada in two different years.

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, The percentage of Electronics & Appliance and Home Furnishings decreased,

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, the opposite was true for

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Video Games and Food &

Beverage

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. In 2005, Electronics & Appliance items

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the most bought online

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for 35 %,

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, after 5 years, its percentage witnessed a considerable drop of 5 per cent. During the same five-year period, the demand for Food & Beverage significantly jump from more than a fifth in 2005 to over 30% in 2010, eventually

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2005, the Home Furnishings industry boasted an impressive 25% of the total online sales in Canada.

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, after 5 years, the figures dropped significantly to 15%. The least preferred sector in 2005 was Video Games which made up 18%,

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, in 2010, it surpassed sales of Home Furnishings,

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represented only 23%