The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how
plastic
is extracted and recycled from plastic
bottles
.
The process starts with used plastic
bottles
being collected from recycling bins. A recycling truck collects the bottles
from bins placed around the city and transports them to the recycling facility. Where the bottles
are sorted out by hand and then
sent to a hydraulic compressor which compresses them into blocks.
These blocks then
go to a crusher, which breaks them into smaller scraps of plastic
. After getting crushed, the scrapes are sent for a wash. Next,
these scrapes are fed to a machine which processes them down further
and turns them into small pellets, ,
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finally
these pellets are heated up to form raw materials, which are Add a comma
,finally
then
shipped out and used to make various products such
as bottles
, containers, bags etc.
Overall
, the recycling process consists of nine steps, which include collecting and sorting bottles
, Compressing and crushing followed by turning them into pellets for raw materials. Products from raw materials are made and the cycle continues.Submitted by eerkare on
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