The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how
plastic
is extracted and recycled from
plastic
bottles
. The process starts with used
plastic
bottles
being collected from recycling bins. A recycling truck collects the
bottles
from bins placed around the city and transports them to the recycling facility. Where the
bottles
are sorted out by hand and
then
sent to a hydraulic compressor which compresses them into blocks. These blocks
then
go to a crusher, which breaks them into smaller scraps of
plastic
. After getting crushed, the scrapes are sent for a wash.
Next,
these scrapes are fed to a machine which processes them down
further
and turns them into small pellets,
,
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finally
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these pellets are heated up to form raw materials, which are
then
shipped out and used to make various products
such
as
bottles
, containers, bags etc.
Overall
, the recycling process consists of nine steps, which include collecting and sorting
bottles
, Compressing and crushing followed by turning them into pellets for raw materials. Products from raw materials are made and the cycle continues.
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