The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The picture shows the precise steps involved in recycling
plastic
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bottles. It is clear from the picture that the
overall
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mechanism comprised three steps starting with collecting and sorting , followed by cleaning and compressing, and
finally
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producing the raw materials for making end products.
To begin
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with, recycling commences when people dump their
plastic
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wastes into the trash from where garbage collectors used to carry rubbish into a recycling centre. After that, the
plastic
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bottles are separated manually by hand and crushed to form blocks.
The next step is
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to crush those blocks to produce small pellets using a two-gear machine and
then
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collected them in a box for being washed. Immediately, these tiny particles are poured into a machine and heated for forming raw materials. In the final phase, these raw materials are used to manufacture
plastic
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bottles and containers, pencils, shirts and bags. The process again starts after these products end their utilities and are thrown into the bins.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Recycling process
  • Disposal
  • Collection
  • Sorting
  • Cleaning
  • Contaminants
  • Recycling center
  • Plastic flakes
  • Melting
  • Re-shaping
  • Raw materials
  • Transformation
  • Repurposing
  • End products
  • Variety
  • Sustainability
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