The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The images below illustrate the alterations that the Queen Mary Hospital has witnessed from the time it was opened in 1960 up to 2000.
Overall
, the hospital itself has not changed over the
40 year
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period.
However
, the shopping
centre
, farmland, and car park have undergone many displacements, resizing, and readjustments, whether significant or minute.
To begin
with, the parking area remained unvaried for the first twenty years. It can
also
be seen that the shopping
centre
was completely demolished and replaced with a cancer
centre
and a pharmaceutical facility.
Moreover
, the farmland was fully destructed.
Instead
, a nursing institution was built.
On the other hand
, the
last
twenty years presented new renovations.
Nonetheless
, the hospital was untouched. Evidently, the parking area halved in width to make space for the new, smaller nursing school.
In addition
to that, the cancer
centre
was extended to form a vast
L shaped
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structure.
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  • initial facilities
  • replacement
  • significant extension
  • absorbed
  • developments
  • introduction
  • adjacent
  • evolution
  • enhancing healthcare services
  • commercial spaces
  • medical facilities
  • expansion
  • modern healthcare needs
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