The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons

The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons
The bar chart represents data about
achievement
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the achievement
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of three
teams
A
B
C
in different periods of time from 2002 to 2006. Looking from an
overall
perspective, there
are
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only one
team
which during all these years got the highest number of points it is
Team
B
.
However
, other groups did not show
the
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stable results. In 2002,
team
A represented the lowest point ever (5
pt
).
Team
B
demonstrated the highest point (82
pt
).
Team
C
riches to 10
pt
. In the next year
2003
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the proportion of two
teams
increased.
Team
A grew on 6pt and
teams
C
rose on 5pt.
In contrast
,
Team
B
decreased on 22pt. In 2004 the situation changed. The Number of points
Team
A soared significantly and riched 35pt.
Whereas
,
teams
B
and
C
continued to decline. In the following
years
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the proportion of
Team
A dipped considerably.
Team
C
decreased gradually.
While
team
B
went up and riched 55pt.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words teams, b, c, team, pt with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "represents" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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