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Some people claim that too much focus and resources have been spent to protect wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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To prevent wild
animals
 and
fowl
 from extinction is crucial to keep our food chain undisturbed and the environment safe.
According to
 some folk, spending too many resources and paying attention to wild
animals
 and
fowl
 is not worth it. To commence with, the prevention of extinct
species
 has been an inevitable issue.
Although
, some people reckon that too much focus and resources should not be spent on preventing wild
animals
 and
fowl
. The money or funds manipulated for prevention can be used for underprivileged communities so they can survive happily by accomplishing their necessities.
For instance
, some countries,
such
 as South Africa, deprive of many amenities, which are crucial for a healthy life.
Therefore
, offering
such
 money to them may be a wise step
instead
 of wasting it on wild
species
 and bird protection.
On the other hand
, the interruption of human beings is the only cause of the extinction of some wild
species
 and
fowl
, which
also
 might be the reason for the occurrence of climate change.
Nonetheless
, aggression in the population has deteriorated many forests, which are habitats of wild
animals
 for the sake of houses, furniture, and habiliments. Not only wild
animals
 and
fowl
 have lost their residence because of humans but
also
 the environment got contaminated. Preserving wild
animals
 and
fowl
 is not a burden it is a responsibility of every individual.
Thus
, spending resources and paying too much attention is appropriate to save their dwellings and lives.
In addition
, the population can raise funds to open zoos or habitats for rare
species
 and can
also
 keep our environment rejuvenated. In conclusion, catastrophes caused by human beings and their inventions have snatched residents of wild
animals
 and
fowl
, which have made them extinct. So, protecting them is indispensable by providing enough care and funds.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • wildlife conservation
  • ecosystem preservation
  • sustainable development
  • biodiversity
  • habitat destruction
  • ecological balance
  • ethical responsibility
  • economic benefits
  • endangered species
  • poaching
  • education and awareness
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