Many people think that mobile phones should be banned in public places such as libraries, shops and public transport. Do you agree or disagree?

There is an argument suggesting the prohibition of cell

phones

in public

places

. In

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essay, I will argue that it is not reasonable to

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limit mobile

phones

in these

places

as the majority of individuals are dependent on their cells for working or personal reasons, and

further

, banning mobiles or other modern gadgets would strip public

places

of their significant capabilities. One reason for my disagreement with prohibiting

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phones

in public venues is that most people are required by their professions to be easily reachable at any time on their

phones

.

For instance

, Doctors, Lawyers, and Policemen are merely a few of

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jobs that should be available during the day.

This

ban could complicate situations for them since

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accessibility

is essential for their careers.

Hence

, regulating the use of

phones

in communal venues can impact the jobs of many individuals.

Moreover

, if

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phones

were to be

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strictly

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society, their significantly beneficial functionality would be neglected.

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is because

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spite of their regular application being for things

such

as web surfing or playing games, these gadgets have

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capabilities to enhance

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public

places

. Transportation,

for example

, can be improved by the use of these tools so that passengers can be aware of the arrival and

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departure

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schedules

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in advance in order to prevent the overcrowding in

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system.

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, neglecting their benefits for

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society would result in

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public issues

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unresolved. In conclusion, I would argue that mobile

phones

ought to be left unregulated in public venues on the grounds that

this

ban will make

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uncomfortable for most public users because they are bound by their profession to leave their

phones

available during the day, and

furthermore

,

this

ban can result in the benefits of mobile

phones

for public

places

being overlooked.