You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Many people today find it difficult to balance the demands of their work and personal life. What are the causes of this situation, and what can individuals and employers do to reduce the problem? You should give reasons for your answer, and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.
It is argued that
people
tend to choose well-paid jobs
. But someone find
it too hard to stabilize the Change the verb form
finds
require
of their job and private Replace the word
requirements
life
. This
may lead to many difference
Replace the word
different
situation
in the Fix the agreement mistake
situations
daily-
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daily life
life
. Thus
there are a lot of solution
that individuals or white-collar Fix the agreement mistake
solutions
jobs
can do to decrease the issues.
To begin
with, the serious problem is the increased workload that many people
have to deal with. Initially
, the more amount of job
, the more stress workers have suffered. Recently, office-related Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
jobs
expect to stay longer and be available outside traditional working hours. Not only the convenience of fixed
Correct article usage
a fixed
time
period but also
the long-term of the work
. Furthermore
, the rise of communication tools has accelerated the trend jump significantly in various fields of works
. Fix the agreement mistake
work
Hence
people
are always contactable. Moreover
, the labour market increasing
competitive to avoid economic recession and unemployment Change the word
increasingly
rate
. Fix the agreement mistake
rates
For
this
reason, workers are under pressure as the volume of work
are
too much. Change the verb form
is
As a result
, some employees feel fear loss
of promotion or redundancy if they resist. Change preposition
of loss
For instance
, people
work
in Correct pronoun usage
who work
office
that have competitive always Fix the agreement mistake
offices
work
at 100% they can so they often control the balance between personal life
and work
.
On the other hand
, there are a lot of solutions that white-collar jobs
can apply to have a better life
. To commence with, employers should clarify with their employees the time
. Therefore
, learning management skills is quite important for each people
. When they are expect
to be free of Change the verb form
are expected
work
and out of contact, they must ensure private time
and have some trips to relax. However
, teenage now priority
flexible Replace the word
prioritise
time
because they can change their time
flex. In addition
, people
ought to offer advice and coach to
staff in areas. One Change preposition
apply
clearly
example is more and more Change the word
clear
people
go to the techniques to ask for the
advice and most of them are stress control and relaxation techniques.
In conclusion, Correct article usage
apply
balance
Wrong verb form
balancing
the
Correct article usage
apply
work
and personal life
is very important due to
the amount of job
and Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
people
don’t know how to manage their time
. To get a high salary workers have to work
hard. However
, they should care about their health. Lastly
there have many Add a comma
,Lastly
solution
to reduce Change to a plural noun
solutions
this
problem like manage
Change the verb form
managing
the
Correct article usage
apply
time
, control
the stressWrong verb form
controlling
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