The table shows the passenger and aircraft movements for last year at Singapore Changi Airport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the passenger and aircraft movements for last year at Singapore Changi Airport.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table graph depicts how many passengers and aeroplanes moved in
last
year
at Changi Airport in Singapore.
Overall
, generally, the
number
of passengers and aircraft was reasonably stable with some fluctuations. The figure for the passenger traffic was relatively steady for the given period of the
year
, an average of 45 million, apart from the lowest
number
of 4.109.038 in February and the highest
number
of 5.093.465 in December, the latter perhaps reflecting Christmas traffic. In terms of the percentage changes, there was the biggest rise of 6.3% in January and the lowest drop of 2.5% in March, the rest of the months' changes were between -0.6% and 3.4%. The total proportion of passengers for
last
year
was 54.093.070, and the average growth was 0.7%. With regards to aircraft movements, the aeroplane numbers again steadily operated through the
year
with a slightly higher figure at 30.353 in January. The percentage changes were volatile, the range being from by far the largest increase of 7.6% in January to the bottom
number
of minus 5% in both September and November. The total amount of aeroplanes was 341.537, an average fall of 0.7%. A significant conclusion that can be made is that being seen a means rise of 0.7% in passenger traffic and a fall of 0.7% in aircraft movements, there were some profits produced.
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