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some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature of their own country than other countries. do you agree or disagree?

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Introduction
In recent years, whether teaching the
literature
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 of their own
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 or other
countries
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 which plays a vital role in education.
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 trend is not without disadvantages, the advantages will be far overshadowed.
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On the one hand,
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 of the other
countries
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 has some benefits. the foreign
literature
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 book provides
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a deep
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 language for the
children
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 about the value of cultures and traditions of the different
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 around the world.
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 means that it can help them avoid cultural shock or other problems related to cultural culture when they travel abroad or work for an international company in the future.
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, understanding cultural heritage allows people to understand distinct histories and cultures,
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, enhancing globalization.
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, the Vatican Museum exhibits work from several European
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, allowing the smallest
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 in the world to be a bridge to explaining the cultural values of distinct nations under one roof.
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On the other hand
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,
children
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 can receive the benefits from teaching
children
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literature
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 of their own
country
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.
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the literaries reflect the historical background and the human by illustrating a human way of life. the knowledge that the
children
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 had from the
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 lesson which helps to spread students' knowledge about the history and culture of my
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. Second, it is
also
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 beneficial for meaningful messages to the development of the
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.
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, in 'Thanh Giong's legend story, the kids have a chance to find out about their ancestors who went through many challenges and sacrificed theory, themselves for the independence of Viet Nam.
Conclusion
In conclusion, with the convincing argument, mentioned
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 of their own
country
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 plays an important role than the other
countries
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. By considering, all of the pros of pros and cons. I think I think each person who makes the best decision for themselves.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Native literature
  • Cultural identity
  • Heritage
  • Traditions
  • National pride
  • Language skills
  • Idiomatic expressions
  • Engagement
  • Relatability
  • Broaden perspectives
  • Cultural awareness
  • Open-mindedness
  • Literary heritage
  • Bias
  • Diverse perspectives
  • Global community
  • Domestic vs. international literature
  • Cultural nuances
  • Sense of belonging
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