The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000

The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000
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The given line graph shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. In-line ,graph data is described below.
Firstly
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, in Pizza in 1975 there was around 5,
then
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it increase by 5 in 1980, in 1985 it was around 30, in 1990 it increase by 60 and from 1995 to 2000 it was around 85.
Secondly
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, in Fish and chips from 1975 to ,1985 it increases with speed and
then
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it moves slowly and from 1990 to 2000.
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, in the Hamburgers in ,1975 it was 100 which reduces by 85 in 1980, which increase by 90 in 1985,
then
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from 1990 to 2000 it keeps on decreasing by 40. In conclusion, with pizza and fish and chips teenagers per fare more and more but hamburgers are the only which consumption was low. The about data is from Australian teenagers on three items.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Consumption
  • Trend
  • Hamburgers
  • Pizza
  • Fried chicken
  • Period
  • Health awareness
  • Availability
  • Taste preferences
  • Marketing influence
  • Implications
  • Western culture
  • Peak periods
  • Promotions
  • Societal habits
  • Patterns
  • Popular
  • Declined
  • Introduction
  • Eating habits
  • Summarise
  • Prediction
  • Recommendations
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