In many societies in the world, the population is ageing rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare.

One of the main themes today is about supporting old

people

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health care services.Now our society thinks

how

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government

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the government

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can ensure elderly men and women

to

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care

their

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for their

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health, but their number increases every day and

this

task becomes harder

respectively

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.As I think, it is mentioned

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the general standard of living.We will be able to give treatment to everyone

,

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if

medicine

becomes more accessible for all groups of society.So, it can be difficult to make their life easier after ten years at least.

Firstly

,

it is clear that

medicine

isn'

t

free.In our

country

is costs very expensive.

Moreover

, retired old

people

can'

t

allow themself big spends of money, if they live alone.

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, in

Mangystau

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region twenty

percent

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of all pensioners live in poverty because of low social security.Even the

insurence

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insurance

can'

t

give

a

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chance to get

a

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good treatment.

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, it

is appears

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to be true that

government

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the government

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doesn'

t

try to develop the sector of

medicine

.It might be the result of massive corruption or something like that.

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,

at

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thirty

years

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there

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t

made

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any significant

changing

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or

addings

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additions

to reform

the

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medicine

in our

country

.All we have now is the legacy, which was given by

country

of

soviets

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.Wherever you go, you will see hospitals,

clinics

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which were built in

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the socialistic

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socialistic

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era.We

didn'

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t

make

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any innovations since

taking

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the

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independence. In conclusion, taking all

mentioned

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arguments, facts and examples, we can say that our

country

needs very large changes, which can be made by large-scale reforms.Elderly

people

today aren'

t

protected by society

,

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until we don'

t

start to look at all

people

equally and provide them with enough medical

equipments

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equipment

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, devices and other.