The maps below show the layouts of nature Museum between 2010 and 2013.

The maps below show the layouts of nature Museum between 2010 and 2013.
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The map illustrates the
layout
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of the Nature Museum in the time periods of 2010 and 2013. The changes that have
occured
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occurred
in little more than a decade in the
layout
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and the infrastructure is evidently seen in the map. The most obvious difference is the absence of the gardens in North-East of the plan which was present in 2010. A shop, a cafe and the Mammals section
along with
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a human origins display replace the
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gardens in 2013. The other noticeable change is the addition of
Ice
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age hall
along with
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insects to the North-West of the blueprint in a decade and three years. The Dinosaurs
dispaly
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display
has not been modified in 2013. The Ocean Hall
as well as
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the ticket counter in the Lobby through which you can enter remain the same in the blueprint of
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plan. The Nature Museum has expanded and added many halls to its original
layout
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plan of 2010. In 2013, the
layout
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of the Nature Museum includes Ice Age
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as well.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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