The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1
The table illustrates the
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
travelers
who visited Change the spelling
travellers
to
five different countries Remove the preposition
apply
in
every five years from 1990 to 2005. These data have Change preposition
apply
presented
in millions. It is obvious that the most Add a missing verb
been presented
visitors
have recorded in 2005.
At the begining
of data collection, Correct your spelling
beginning
majority
of Correct article usage
the majority
visitors
have
selected Europe as their destination which was slightly more than 280. When reached in 2005 almost 400 Unnecessary verb
apply
visitors
have been to Europe with a huge increase.
In addition
, the second favorite location was America except in 2005 because there was a slight reduction in this
year. Asia and the Pacific came up in 2005 although
it had a
third place in 1990,1995 and 2000. Correct article usage
apply
However
, America, Asia and the Pacific states have close numbers in last
year Correct article usage
the last
such
as 113.2 and 135.8 respectively.
However
, the least amount of travelers
have chosen Change the spelling
travellers
Middle
East Correct article usage
the Middle
in
every year and that was just 9.8 in 1990. Change preposition
apply
Although
it is,the
Correct your spelling
then
the
number of Remove the redundancy
apply
visitors
have
enhanced in all years Change the verb form
has
upto
15.8 in 2005.
When studying Correct your spelling
up to
this
table, it is clear that
almost all parts of the world has
a huge increase of theChange the verb form
have
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