Advertisement of snacks and toys have a great impact on children and their parents so,the advetismets to children should be banned.do you agree or disagree?

notice of

snaks

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snacks

snakes

and toys have a substantial effect on

children

and

rheir

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their

parenets

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parents

. so the publicities to

children

should be blocked.do you agree or disagree? First of all, several companies producing goods related to kid’s games are trying their best to attract younger customers, as they could be their easy target for high sales.

As a result

, the majority of the

times

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, their caregivers are not having any option other than buying it for their

kids

and later

realizes

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that it was of no use.

For example

, a famous kid’s gaming company launches a new game saying it is very useful for kid’s logical building abilities, but later they came to know it was just

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a wastage

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of money. It is indirectly affecting the whole family’s budget planning. So,

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parents have to spend wisely

while

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buying any playing products for their

children

.

On the other hand

, the food manufacturing industry especially for

children

is spending a huge amount in creating attractive ads for

kids

. They are not even considering if that commodity is good for them or not.

For example

, ice-cream making company markets its new stock in the media by using celebrity

kid

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kids

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in the advertisement but does not give much importance if that product is having ingredients, which are safe for the

children

. So, elders of the family have to be mindful whenever they are purchasing any foodstuffs for their

kids

with

regards

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to the contents of the item. In conclusion, nowadays marketing of the products related to

kids

is having a tremendous negative impact on

the

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kids

and their parents. They are not only spoiling the health of the

kids

but are

also

affecting the budget planning of the family, so

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ads have to be banned completely. The caretakers of the

children

have to think wisely

spend

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and spend

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appropriately

while

buying goods related to their

kids

, as it would be of no use after a

while

or it could affect the well-being of the

kids

.