You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that the

environment

is the responsibility of sole authorities and big corporations and

people

can not take any action to improve it. I

partially

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against

this

opinion and think that both factors play a vital role in ameliorating the surrounding

environment

.

To begin

with, governments and companies are the main entity in the operation of multiple aspects of life

such

as production and social policy. In order to circulate a proper social in a country or

city

, governments have to bring about appropriate policies and regulations to control

people

's actions.

Similarly

, big corporations navigate the market and decide either what product to be manufactured or promote consumer habits.

For instance

, a most-popular beverage company in Vietnam called "Milo" in recent years have changed their straw in a carton of milk from plastic straw to paper

straw

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straws

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,

this

replacement has made a significant improvement in Vietnam's

environment

as it reduced 30% of the total amount of plastic waste in

this

country after one year of the implement.

However

, individuals should accompany with government and companies to join hands together to enhance the

environment

quality. As an apparent fact,

people

directly or indirectly impact

the

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nature on a daily basis, and

whether

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apply

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what

people

buy or what they consume and

dispose

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can be an example. In Amsterdam, the

city

was well-known for the absence of cars on the street,

instead

, most

family

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families

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here prefer to participate in the traffic by friendly vehicle, mostly bicycles.

This

wholesome habit of Amsterdam

people

has a significant advantage for their

city

and always keeps the

city

's

environment

figures

on

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among

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the top cleanest cities in the world. In conclusion, Authorities and big companies are undeniably needed for the improvement progress of the

environment

but they should altogether cooperate with society to do

this

mission more precisely and maximize the good effects.