The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how plastic bottles were recycled.
Overall
, the recycling process took 9 steps from collecting to reproduction into other forms of items to can be used again. White pollution which is a hot topic nowadays was
due to
the over usage of plastic products that caused problems that destroy our living environment. In order to solve
this
problem, people are encouraged to live with the principle of ‘3R’ which is reuse, reduce and recycle. After finishing using one container, the citizen is welcome to dump it into a recycle bin which will be
then
collected by a truck and sent to the recycling centre. Meanwhile, to avoid manufacturing things that couldn’t be reused, there is usually a volunteer to help sort and separate collected things.
Furthermore
, the items qualified to undergo will be compressed into blocks which were easier to crush into small pieces. The fragments were washed in water and
then
put into a crusher to produce pellets form.
Moreover
, it was followed by heating to shape it into raw materials which are ready to bring out end products.
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