Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is considered by
some
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that those kinds of
sports
which could hurt
people
should not be allowed to take
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place,
while
some may view
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it
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that
people
are free enough to choose any
sports
they prefer. In my opinion, I believe that adults could make their own decision about what kind of interest to choose and they are responsible for their decisions;
however
, dangerous kinds of sport could seriously damage society. On the one hand, it is scientifically proven that any kinds of physical
activities
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release stress.
In other words
,
then
more activities are dynamic
then
more stress is released. Highly impulsive
people
, mostly males having high testosterone levels in
blood
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could decrease the flash of violence only by doing extreme
sports
. In some particular cases jogging or yoga are not able to help.
This
is one of the reasons
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being interested in dangerous activities.
As a result
, there are less domestic violence, office conflicts and toxic relationships.
On the other hand
, extreme
sports
could seriously harm young
people
. Usually, extreme
sports
are popular
between
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teenagers as during that period
people
are seeking different new adventures
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new emotions and positive feelings. Young
people
do not understand fully the responsibility for their lives and others. As an example,
such
platforms as Facebook, Instagram and Tik Tok
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various
of
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contents
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done by professionals.
However
, teenagers are not able to understand the difference between
experienced
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and
usual
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person. They try to imitate performances and end up
by
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terribly injuring themselves. In conclusion, in my opinion, today we live in times of full freedom and are able to choose any hobby we are interested in.
Nevertheless
,
the
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government does not ban dangerous
sport
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the
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society cannot handle the problem alone of teenagers’ 
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • severe injuries
  • fatalities
  • base jumping
  • bull running
  • extreme skiing
  • safeguard
  • well-being
  • regulating
  • avoidable harm
  • healthcare costs
  • burdening
  • personal freedom
  • autonomy
  • training
  • equipment
  • mitigated
  • personal satisfaction
  • mental health benefits
  • resilience
  • adventure
  • assess risks
  • public safety
  • unnecessary healthcare costs
  • outright bans
  • balanced approach
  • stringent safety standards
  • mandatory training sessions
  • adequately informed
  • safeguarding
  • public health
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